CocA cOLa in the sunset
I sat on the bench in my backyard Enjoying the sunset,
I sat on the bench in my backyard Enjoying the sunset,
Holding a Coca Cola in my right hand.
I felt the wind blowing, waving my hair softly.
I felt the warm sunlight on my face making my eyes wrinkle.
And than, I opened a Coca Cola can, Making that sound that everybody knows.
The great moment I pour a Coca Cola into my honorable mouth
Joyful, Wonderful, Beautiful, Sweetness spreading in my mouth.
God bless me
Coca Cola bless me.
While enjoying the Coca Cola passing through my throat,
I could feel the coldness of the magical Coca Cola all the way down to my guts.
And than I looked up,
I could see an airplane flying through the sky, silent,
Making a white line behind,
Dividing the blue sky into half.
Thinking, I believe I can fly~
Thinking, Did I finish the Coke.
Peace.
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Making a white line behind,Dividing the blue sky into half, is my favorite line, it shows the reader what is happening around you, also I really like how you focuses on a small item like cola,
ReplyDeletenice job yoon
ReplyDeleteThinking, I believe I can fly~ I really like this line because it makes me think i can do anything. I really like you,your descriptive detail.
ReplyDeleteI like your way to express a coke
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